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HRAAAAAAGH.

How about at the funeral?

HRAAAAAAGGGHH.

This was damn funny.

TheMillz responds:

Holy shit it's Egoraptor..... Thanks for commenting man! :D

GODAMN.

You have no idea how hard I am laughing right now. No fucking idea.

Oh my God. This is the best thing I've ever seen in my entire life.

ImpendingRiot responds:

We're glad you like it, man, we made this with love!

Hahaha.

That was truly.....

......... GET READY.........

AWESOME.

Confusing.

I feel like the music did most of the emotional tugging in this piece. The visuals were very jerky and at times completely incoherent. The airport scene was just so confusing. What happened? They boarded planes and then they were outside and then gave each other a high five and then held hands? Did either of them travel? What airport were they at?

You should study up on directing some, it would really help because you can obviously draw well, it's just the storytelling process needs some work. You need to be able to make everything very understandable to the viewer.

You've got the inspiration and the talent, you just need the know how. I just saw that you're 15 and being able to produce results like this at 15 is very admirable. Just look up some books on directing and using the camera as your friend! Good luck on your future works!

skarl3tte responds:

thanks so much for the help, i'll try to do better next time.

Nnnaii knew it.

Always been a fan of Shamoozal. There's something about the delivery of the lines and the animation that makes me want to rewatch each episode again and again. It's not so much the punchline that matters more than how the characters act. My favorite is still Black Friday, but this one is probably SECOND BEST.

1. DIK char: BLACK FRIDAY 177800
2. CAP char: Rated M for... 167400
3. ASS char: Candy Corns 70800

Finish this.

I love Shadow of the Colossus and I agree it is a work of art. As this animation started I thought it had potential because the style was so solid, but then I realized it's just an unfinished storyboard. This is how an animation is supposed to look 40% into its development, not 100%.

If you're going to still-frame an animation, at least do it right. Everything is very choppy and the parts that do have animation are very quick and jerky.

I like the idea and you obviously have the artistic ability, so it'd be really cool if you revisited this old piece and finished it. Best of luck if you do.

Hahaha.

Ohhhh I'm not gunna lie I laughed.

Great job!

I think this is a pretty good piece of flash animation! It's obvious that this is your first flash but there's something to be said for how cohesive it is compared to so many others' first flashes. Keep on animating, and try to work on making the visuals a bit more clean!

KungFu-Gerbil responds:

Its a honour, I honestly appreciate the advice and support it means a lot to me hearing it from one of my flash animating idols. (^^) take care egoraptor, and keep posted

Oh.

People could spend thousands of hours, days, weeks, months, years on a piece of entertainment, but none of those creations will ever measure up to this.

Pretty sweet.

This was pretty enjoyable but it seemed rather cliché. The thing that bugged me most about it was that the gun took out the tree completely while they were trying to axe it to kill it slowly. I'm all for dramatic anticipation but if they could've used the gun to kill the tree that easily, why didn't they in the first place? Because of this I expect The Hyrde to make up things as they go in future episodes, which is something I think completely kills suspense. That gun is way too powerful, and if it takes out ANYTHING, then how am I to fear for the wellbeing of these characters?

This series definitely has potential, visually and conceptually (plus the voice acting is dang decent) but so far I'm at a crossroads. I hope it becomes a great series! :D Good luck!

robfeldman responds:

Thanks for the comment. This is the second mention about the gun, so I thought I should address it. Yes, the gun has TREMENDOUS power, but it does have limitations with regard to the number of times in which it can actually be fired---they got lucky this time 'round. Not seeing the scripts for the future episodes, it is of course expected that you would have no idea about that. Thanks, for the time being, in suspending disbelief. And for the vote. :)

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