Ugh
The 4 is for the funny faces the animator drew
But seriously, I liked this better when it wasn't 6 minutes long and Bug did it.
Ugh
The 4 is for the funny faces the animator drew
But seriously, I liked this better when it wasn't 6 minutes long and Bug did it.
ahahahaha
ahahaha that last part is worth the whole movie.
ah yea :]
ahahaha
ahahaha shit jeff I love this one, definitely one of your best
*blushes* :)
HAAARRRYY
GDI YOU'RE AMAZING
A big pshaww on you! :3
hahaha fuck
God Justin Bieber's super generic face just cracks me up every time.
POKEMON
I love pokemon and battling my pokemon therefore ergo I love this movie
And I love you
silly
why would egoraptor voluntarily voice for this
i don't get it
We're gunna miss him. Rest In Peace Egoraptor.
ahahahah
it started slow but man it really picked up, I lmaoed. the flashback was hilarious
thanks buddy
Neat!
This was really neat, it kept me watching through the whole thing. There were lots of interesting things going on!
Gripes though... the sound was terrible. Not the quality or anything but the actual sounds. There were way too many out of place HMMM and HUH and AHHH's that didn't really need to be there, it could've just been silent and it would've been more effective to express the feeling via the animation. I mean, the fact that the dude says some things, and yet they don't have any dialog is really strange and somewhat unsettling.
Additionally, the music was awful and didn't set any sense of mood. It was reeally out of place.
The tweened camera work was also somewhat nauseating, especially when Glenn starts stealing napkins. There wasn't any fluidity or consistency to the camera movements and they weren't really necessary at all to begin with in my opinion. In fact, most of the character's movements were very tweeny and it was a little annoying.
These things, I think, really kill this animation hard. You have something really good and cute going but it's really not as much of a joy to watch as it should be. As much as I'd like to say that the story is excellent and interesting enough on its own, these flaws really bring it down to a point where I really wouldn't suggest this to anybody, even though I think the story is good.
You're definitely an able writer, but everything else falls really flat. I hope you keep making toons though, you're definitely one of the more interesting authors here!
Hm, well, I suppose I can see what you mean about the motion. I'm not exactly a frame by frame kind of guy, so I can see how it'd all become kind of bad looking after awhile. At least you liked the story though! And I will keep animating, it's what I enjoy doing most. Thanks for taking the time to watch, man!
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