Egoraptor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Heart and the Hand p2]

Neat!

This was really neat, it kept me watching through the whole thing. There were lots of interesting things going on!

Gripes though... the sound was terrible. Not the quality or anything but the actual sounds. There were way too many out of place HMMM and HUH and AHHH's that didn't really need to be there, it could've just been silent and it would've been more effective to express the feeling via the animation. I mean, the fact that the dude says some things, and yet they don't have any dialog is really strange and somewhat unsettling.

Additionally, the music was awful and didn't set any sense of mood. It was reeally out of place.

The tweened camera work was also somewhat nauseating, especially when Glenn starts stealing napkins. There wasn't any fluidity or consistency to the camera movements and they weren't really necessary at all to begin with in my opinion. In fact, most of the character's movements were very tweeny and it was a little annoying.

These things, I think, really kill this animation hard. You have something really good and cute going but it's really not as much of a joy to watch as it should be. As much as I'd like to say that the story is excellent and interesting enough on its own, these flaws really bring it down to a point where I really wouldn't suggest this to anybody, even though I think the story is good.

You're definitely an able writer, but everything else falls really flat. I hope you keep making toons though, you're definitely one of the more interesting authors here!

Bobert-Rob responds:

Hm, well, I suppose I can see what you mean about the motion. I'm not exactly a frame by frame kind of guy, so I can see how it'd all become kind of bad looking after awhile. At least you liked the story though! And I will keep animating, it's what I enjoy doing most. Thanks for taking the time to watch, man!

[Spider Powers]

I... I...

... I never knew I had a chid. :(

just2pale responds:

Mother!

[ChristMASS Inc.]

Ohh nooo

Why am I on the naughty list? :(

KartuneHustla responds:

You've been a naughty boy this year!!!! lol

[A Newgrounds Christmas]

Yessss

This was the best (I watched it a while ago just didn't review) but I didn't watch the credits and didn't realize you used my outtakes for the merry christmas stuff ahahaha you're the best

Jazza responds:

they were all too good, i had to :P
you're the bomb ego :)

[Press Start: Familiar]

Excellent

This is my favorite press start adventures cartoon so far, great timing on the jokes, and Vile always gets a laugh from me. Great work.

DarkMazeStudios responds:

Thanks!

Hey... don't I know you?

[Like a Brother]

Really neat!!

I would watch this in my TV. Great mix of style with simple animation. The color scheming was a little hard on the eyes I think, the characters didn't stand out too super well against the backgrounds although the black shades helped. I think everything was around the same saturation! A stylistic choice no doubt but it did make it a little difficult to watch imo.

Regardless this was fantastic!!

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

omlette du fromage

[Did You Hear That?]

Haha.

This was fun to watch, some of the animations got a bit samey after a while but the really imaginative ones were a blast. This was an awesome idea!

Graeme responds:

Cool to hear from you man!
Glad you liked it :)

[Facebook Twitter]

TALKY?!

Talky is your STYLE.

Probably one of my favorite things you've done.

JohnnyUtah responds:

thanks mr raptor

[Pico 09]

GOOODDD.

Yotam how are you so FUNNY AAAARGGHHH WHYYYY

LazyMuffin responds:

WHY ARE YOUR LIPS SO LUSCIOUS GOD ARGHHHH